so young.. i remember these days... WHY DID YOU CHANGE YOUR HAIR!!! ANYWAY, I STILL LOVE HOW ARTISTIC YOU ARE! I shall meet you in Canada when I finally get there and have your autograph! I shall make you my model and I can model for you as well. Exciting! Fashion Photogs working together!
This isn't grunge, but it's an alright composition. The clock directly above you is a bit of a distracting bit of... irritating nonsense. the texture of the wall, while more grunge-ey, isn't nearly old, textured enough to require that tag. If you work on your rule of 3rds, as well as the C rule and your general composition skills, I'm sure things like that wouldn't happen.