so young.. i remember these days... WHY DID YOU CHANGE YOUR HAIR!!! ANYWAY, I STILL LOVE HOW ARTISTIC YOU ARE! I shall meet you in Canada when I finally get there and have your autograph! I shall make you my model and I can model for you as well. Exciting! Fashion Photogs working together!
This isn't grunge, but it's an alright composition. The clock directly above you is a bit of a distracting bit of... irritating nonsense. the texture of the wall, while more grunge-ey, isn't nearly old, textured enough to require that tag. If you work on your rule of 3rds, as well as the C rule and your general composition skills, I'm sure things like that wouldn't happen.
I think that it's crazy that there are, like, a million comments on all of your stuff while other people's awesome art gets ignored. You realize that people only comment your stuff because you're "hot" or "emo", right? They probably wouldn't care if you weren't so cute.
Sorry if that sounds mean. I do like some of your pictures. It just makes me mad that people aren't this supportive of some other artists on the site.